Change the estimated price to one that suits your time.
Comments are listed on the side of the disseration on what needs to be changed from the original paper I have wroked on. This needs to rewritten or edited.
add appendix , add wht is required for a masters dissertation needed.
Must all be in English UK style including spelling.
Please add more graphs and information to assist with the theory. I have been told I lack that and that some parts fo not flow. If possible change the flow to better suit what the lecturer is requesting.
Please rewrite and add more information if required. Add a stronger case for the reaserch based on the same subject. Comments from the lecturer are listed on the side on what the issues are. To amend this correctly.