– The referencing apprently is being ask in regards to originality and unclear quotation.
commentation by lecture:
-This quotation is not from Lipscy 2000
-this quotation is not from Diener and Hagen 2012
-DI: Neither of these figures are from Dieckhoff
– In the second paragraph it is a weak transition
-DI: Turnitin suggest this info is from Malteser International not Dieckhoff. Dieckhoff also does not use the term ‘humanitarian’ in his article – his article focuses on nationalism v globalisation. When including citations, you need to include pg nos – this allows your reader to, among other things, verify that you have done your research, and protect you from claims of plagiarism and misrepresenting your research
– If paraphrasing it is required page number.