So basically below in bold print is the feedback the professor gave me on the rough draft. All I really need you to do is to add to this essay 1. (add a conclusion paragraph that sums up the entire essay) 2. (ensure there are at least 5 paragraphs) 3. (edit)
$( please don’t change up the essay, just add on and cite please for whatever you add on.)I uploaded the original rough draft essay.
Excellent job putting together your first draft of the reflection essay.
Nice work covering all the required sections from the assignment instructions.
Keep
adding examples from your class experiences (in the final two weeks of
class), from readings/resources, and from your own life as you revise
this essay for week 6. A couple of additional short quotes or summaries from course readings/resources would fit very well with what you already have.
There
wasn’t a conclusion required in the instructions, so you will want to
add a final paragraph (one that ties up your experiences in the class
and looks ahead to the rest of your journey). For the final draft of the
reflection essay, you want at least 5 paragraphs.