Task Fulfilment- The introduction includes all the relevant parts including the hook, thesis statement and essay outline. First body paragraph with the topic sentence, supporting sentences and a concluding/transitional sentence.
Vocabulary- Adequate range, limited repetition, correct word forms/spelling and tone is academic and formal.
Grammar- Clarity and grammatical correctness of sentences, punctuation, linkers.
Write a clear introduction with all the relevant parts.
Body paragraphs to include the main ideas to be discussed with supporting arguments.
Conclusion with a clear summary of the main points.
Reference list.
Also add a different title for the essay
add atleast 8-10 proofs to your argument + references
I kind of started but i did it wrong please change it.
Also please send it to me as a word document